From 3fedb2f8e29c113bfe018a5f83379da3a1cb33f2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: arse9 <144388527+arse9@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 10 Aug 2024 01:02:25 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Update index.md (#756) Made some sentences clearer. This is a platform for people under the age of 18 as well. ## Changes ## Checks By submitting your pull request for review, you agree to the following: - [x] This contribution was created in whole or in part by me, and I have the right to submit it under the terms of this repository's open source licenses. - [x] I understand and agree that this contribution and a record of it are public, maintained indefinitely, and may be redistributed under the terms of this repository's open source licenses. - [x] To the best of my knowledge, all proposed changes are accurate. --- content/en-us/avatar/index.md | 77 +++++++++++++++++------------------ 1 file changed, 37 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/en-us/avatar/index.md b/content/en-us/avatar/index.md index af2bd45b2..e71eb13bb 100644 --- a/content/en-us/avatar/index.md +++ b/content/en-us/avatar/index.md @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Whether you're creating and selling a basic accessory, clothes, or an avatar cha 2. **Importing and Uploading** — Add your creation to the Roblox servers through Studio. - - Initial validation and moderation occurs during this stage. See each item category section for individual instructions. + - Initial validation and moderation of the asset occurs during this stage. See each item category section for specific instructions. 3. **Publishing and Selling** — Manage your asset on your [Creator Dashboard](https://create.roblox.com/dashboard/creations) where you can set your item price and other Marketplace configurations before you enable the item for sale. @@ -29,9 +29,9 @@ Whether you're creating and selling a basic accessory, clothes, or an avatar cha Create avatar items for Roblox, ranging from clothing, accessories, bodies, and heads. Learn about the various components that power the feature-rich technology unique to Roblox avatars and cosmetics. - + - + Rigid accessories @@ -39,11 +39,11 @@ Create avatar items for Roblox, ranging from clothing, accessories, bodies, and Understand the various components that make up rigid accessories, the most basic form of 3D avatar cosmetics. - + - + Layered clothing @@ -51,23 +51,23 @@ Create avatar items for Roblox, ranging from clothing, accessories, bodies, and Understand the advanced components of layered clothing, accessories that stretch and fit over a target. - +
- + - - -Characters -
-Learn the various components that make up the unique Roblox avatar, including using mesh geometry, rigs, facial animation, and other important components. -
- - - + + + Characters +
+ Learn the various components that make up the unique Roblox avatar, including using mesh geometry, rigs, facial animation, and other important components. +
+ + +
@@ -78,13 +78,13 @@ Learn the various components that make up the unique Roblox avatar, including us Follow step-by-step guides to create accessories, clothing, and characters to start creating your own unique 3D avatar asset. - +

- + If you're looking to integrate avatars, accessories, and clothes into experiences, see the [Characters](../characters/index.md) section in the Engine documentation. @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ If you're looking to integrate avatars, accessories, and clothes into experience After creating your items, you can begin the process of selling your assets on the Marketplace. Learn more about the policies, processes, and payment structures that enable you to manage and sell your creations safely and efficiently. - + Marketplace Policy @@ -100,23 +100,23 @@ After creating your items, you can begin the process of selling your assets on t Learn about the user requirements for selling, as well as the technical and community-related specifications required for the Marketplace. - + - -Intellectual Property -
-Understand how IP works on the Roblox ecosystem to protect yourself and the community. -
- - - + + Intellectual Property +
+ Understand how IP works on the Roblox ecosystem to protect yourself and the community. +
+ + +

- + Publishing Steps @@ -124,18 +124,17 @@ Understand how IP works on the Roblox ecosystem to protect yourself and the comm Upload your catalog-ready asset to the Marketplace and set the item on sale using various creator controls. - + - Fees and Commissions
Understand how fees, payments, commissions, and other monetary and purchasing details work for your various asset types.
- +
@@ -144,7 +143,7 @@ Understand how IP works on the Roblox ecosystem to protect yourself and the comm Roblox provides additional resources and tools to enable creation. Check out the various Studio and third-party tools designed to expedite and ease the process of creation. - + Downloadable Resources @@ -152,22 +151,22 @@ Roblox provides additional resources and tools to enable creation. Check out the View various downloadable resources ranging from sample model files, template files, project boilerplates, and more. - + Studio Tools
- Studio provides several tools designed to make the creation process more straight forward and efficient. + Studio provides several tools designed to make the creation process more straightforward and efficient.
- +

- + Third-Party Add-ons @@ -175,9 +174,7 @@ Roblox provides additional resources and tools to enable creation. Check out the Third-party add-ons and tools are available to help expedite the creation process in your third-party applications. - + -
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