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 # Privacy policy
 
-This site provides readers with information about library technology, and is not designd to collect personal data. The following is some information about how we handle data on this site.
+This site provides readers with information about library technology, and is not designed to collect personal data. The following is some information about how we handle data on this site.
 
 ## Analytics
 
-We use an analytics platform called [Umami](https://umami.is/) to collect data about site usage. Umami is a privacy-focused analytics tool that does not track personal data or use cookies. For more information, see the [analytics](/analytics) page.
+We use an analytics platform called [Umami](https://umami.is/) to collect data about site usage. Umami provides privacy-focused analytics for websites that does not track personal data or use cookies. For more information, see the [analytics](/analytics) page.
 
 ## Hosting
 
-The site is hosted using [Netlify](https://www.netlify.com/). Website hosting companies can collect data, such as the IP addresses communicating with their servers. See the [Netlify privacy policy](https://www.netlify.com/privacy/) for how they handle data.
+The site is hosted using [Netlify](https://www.netlify.com/). As well as websites being able to collect data, website hosting companies can also do this, such as the IP addresses communicating with their servers. See the [Netlify privacy policy](https://www.netlify.com/privacy/) for how they handle data.
 
 ## Cookies
 
-This site does not use any first party cookies to track users or collect data. However, the site integrates with some third-party services, who can set their own cookies. The site retrieves data from [Google Sheets](https://workspace.google.com/intl/en_uk/products/sheets/) in order to populate table content on the Product Directory and Who uses what web pages. It also calls to the [Website Carbon Calculator](https://www.websitecarbon.com/privacy-policy/) to display web page carbon footprint estimates.
+This site does not use any first-party cookies to track users. However, the site integrates with some third-party services, who can set their own cookies. The site retrieves data from [Google Sheets](https://workspace.google.com/intl/en_uk/products/sheets/) in order to populate the tables on the Product Directory and 'Who uses what' web pages. The site also calls to the [Website Carbon Calculator](https://www.websitecarbon.com/privacy-policy/) to display carbon footprint estimates.