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Made some sentences clearer. This is a platform for people under the age
of 18 as well.

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2. **Importing and Uploading** &mdash; Add your creation to the Roblox servers through Studio.

- Initial validation and moderation occurs during this stage. See each item category section for individual instructions.
- Initial validation and moderation of the asset occurs during this stage. See each item category section for specific instructions.

3. **Publishing and Selling** &mdash; Manage your asset on your [Creator Dashboard](https://create.roblox.com/dashboard/creations) where you can set your item price and other Marketplace configurations before you enable the item for sale.

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Create avatar items for Roblox, ranging from clothing, accessories, bodies, and heads. Learn about the various components that power the feature-rich technology unique to Roblox avatars and cosmetics.

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Understand the various components that make up rigid accessories, the most basic form of 3D avatar cosmetics.
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Understand the advanced components of layered clothing, accessories that stretch and fit over a target.
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Learn the various components that make up the unique Roblox avatar, including using mesh geometry, rigs, facial animation, and other important components.
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Learn the various components that make up the unique Roblox avatar, including using mesh geometry, rigs, facial animation, and other important components.
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Follow step-by-step guides to create accessories, clothing, and characters to start creating your own unique 3D avatar asset.
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If you're looking to integrate avatars, accessories, and clothes into experiences, see the [Characters](../characters/index.md) section in the Engine documentation.
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## Selling

After creating your items, you can begin the process of selling your assets on the Marketplace. Learn more about the policies, processes, and payment structures that enable you to manage and sell your creations safely and efficiently.

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Understand how IP works on the Roblox ecosystem to protect yourself and the community.
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Upload your catalog-ready asset to the Marketplace and set the item on sale using various creator controls.
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Understand how fees, payments, commissions, and other monetary and purchasing details work for your various asset types.
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Roblox provides additional resources and tools to enable creation. Check out the various Studio and third-party tools designed to expedite and ease the process of creation.

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Studio provides several tools designed to make the creation process more straight forward and efficient.
Studio provides several tools designed to make the creation process more straightforward and efficient.
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