Fixed Grammar, Wordiness, and Professionalism (#7)

* Fixed grammar * More Grammar * Fixed Wordiness and Technical Jargon * Made it seem more professional * Change from kb per second to kbs
cardboard-ink · Oct 19, 2023 · d550b17 · d550b17
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diff --git a/src/routes/(auth)/login/[userId]/+page.server.ts b/src/routes/(auth)/login/[userId]/+page.server.ts
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ export const actions = {
     const firstPostTitle = data[0].title
     const createdBy = data[0].createdBy
     if (createdBy !== userId) {
-      throw error(403, 'hehe, acting smug eh? you\'re not the owner of this account, this incident will be reported to the account owner. have a nice day :) ');
+      throw error(403, 'Please make sure you create the post with the account you are trying to verify! For security purposes, this incident has been reported to the account owner.');
     }
     db.guildedVerificationSessions.deleteMany({
       where: {
@@ -108,4 +108,4 @@ export const actions = {
     }
     throw redirect(302, '/');
   }
-}
+}
diff --git a/src/routes/(auth)/login/[userId]/+page.svelte b/src/routes/(auth)/login/[userId]/+page.svelte
@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@
     Are you really who you say you are?
   </h1>
   <p class="p">
-    We need to confirm that you are really the person you claim to issue the cookie which will be used for verification later.
-    However, we require you to do the following steps to confirm your identity:
+    We need to verify your identity!
+    Please complete following steps to confirm your identity:
   </p>
   <ol class="list-decimal">
     <li>

diff --git a/src/routes/(protected)/settings/your-apps/[id]/+page.svelte b/src/routes/(protected)/settings/your-apps/[id]/+page.svelte
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
         Editing ➡️ {app.name}
     </h2>
     <h6 class="h6">Note:</h6>
-    <p>Carboard currently only supports upto 512kbs of request body size per app update, this should not harm much functionality but please use compressed images and try splitting the updates id you do encounter any errors.</p>
+    <p>Carboard currently only supports up to 512KBs of request body size per app update, this should not harm much functionality, however please use compressed images and try splitting the update id you do encounter any errors.</p>
     <div class="flex flex-col gap-4">
         <form class="flex flex-col card p-4 gap-4 justify-center" style="position: relative; height: 73rem" action="?/updateApp" method="post">
             <div class="w-full flex justify-center">
@@ -114,4 +114,4 @@
             <button class="btn variant-filled-error">Delete App</button>
         </form>
     </div>
-</div>
+</div>