Merge pull request #94 from code4policy/yeonwooklee-patch-1

Improves the conclusion, closes issue #72

index.html

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ <h5> Vegetables on my shopping list. </h5>
 	<!-- Insert picture of a purple carrot below this line -->
 	<img src="purple_carrot.png" alt="Purple Carrot" style="width: 100%; max-width: 300px; display: block; margin: 10px auto;">
 
-	<p> In conclusion, gym socks aren't vegetables, carrots used to be purple and you now know the average length of a potato. But you don't know not the distribution of potato lengths or how the length differs by potato type. I hope you can now identify whether or not what you're eating is a vegetable.</p>
+	<p> In conclusion, we've embarked on a journey through the world of vegetables and quirky facts. While gym socks may not be vegetables, the revelation that carrots were once purple adds a touch of unexpected history to your daily diet. Armed with the knowledge of the average potato length, you now possess a unique skill. Despite the brain cell casualties, I hope this whimsical exploration has entertained and enlightened you. As we, a group of dedicated newspeople, refine this piece, consider this your initiation into the fascinating universe of vegetable lore. Bon appétit!</p>
 
 	<p> If you're reading this, you've reached the end of the article and probably lost a few brain cells. Now we, a group of professional newspeople, are going to work on improving it. Kind of like a reverse mad-libs. </p>