Jv oop advanced #1737
Jv oop advanced #1737
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Review Summary
Great job on implementing the logic for creating and drawing figures! Your code demonstrates a solid understanding of object-oriented principles and interfaces. However, there are a few areas for improvement:
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Default Figure Specification: Ensure that the
getDefaultFigure()method inFigureSupplierreturns a white circle with a radius of 10, as per the task requirements. Currently, it returns a circle with a radius of 2. -
Magic Numbers: Replace magic numbers, such as the radius value in
getDefaultFigure(), with constants for better readability and maintainability. -
Random Value Generation: Consider using
random.nextDouble() * someMaxValueto generate dimensions within a reasonable range, as usingrandom.nextDouble()alone may result in very small or zero values. -
Enum String Representation: In the
getDefaultFigure()method, use the string "White" directly instead ofColor.White.name(). -
Constructor Expressions: Avoid using expressions directly in constructors. Instead, create separate variables for better readability.
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Typos in
drawMethod: Correct the typos in thedrawmethod outputs: 'secondleg' should be 'secondLeg', and 'shoterbase' should be 'shorterbase'.
These improvements will enhance the functionality and readability of your code. Keep up the good work, and make sure to address these issues in future projects to avoid similar problems. Your effort and dedication to learning are commendable! 🚀
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| + "longerbase " + getLongerBase() + " units, " | ||
| + "shoterbase " + getShorterBase() + " units, " |
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There's a typo in the draw method output: 'shoterbase' should be 'shorterbase'.
| + "firstLeg " + getFirstLeg() + " units, " | ||
| + "secondleg " + getSecondLeg() + " units, " |
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There's a typo in the draw method output: 'secondleg' should be 'secondLeg'.
| Figure circle = new Circle(colorSupplier.getRandomColor(), random.nextDouble()); | ||
| Figure rectangle = new Rectangle(colorSupplier.getRandomColor(), random.nextDouble(), random.nextDouble()); | ||
| Figure isoscelesTrapezoid = new IsoscelesTrapezoid(colorSupplier.getRandomColor(), random.nextDouble(), random.nextDouble(), 4); | ||
| Figure rightTriangle = new RightTriangle(colorSupplier.getRandomColor(), random.nextDouble(), random.nextDouble()); | ||
| Figure square = new Square(colorSupplier.getRandomColor(), random.nextDouble()); |
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Using random.nextDouble() for dimensions may result in very small or zero values, which might not be suitable for figures. Consider using random.nextDouble() * someMaxValue to ensure the dimensions are within a reasonable range.
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