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Thank you for your hard work on this pull request! 😊 While your code is mostly well-structured and meets many of the task requirements, there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve it:
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Repetition of
save()
Method: In thecreate_order
function, thesave()
method is called twice. This can lead to inefficiencies and potential errors. Please refactor the code to ensuresave()
is called only once. -
Use of Previously Created Functions: In the
update_user
function, directly retrieving the user instead of using the existingget_user
function affects readability and maintainability. Please update the code to use theget_user
function. -
Exception Handling: Ensure that exceptions are handled when retrieving users by ID or username. This will prevent the application from crashing if a user is not found.
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Return Type for
create_movie
: The return type forcreate_movie
is incorrectly specified. It should return aMovie
instance, not aQuerySet
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Missing Migrations: Please confirm that the migration file is up-to-date with the current model changes to ensure tests pass.
Once these issues are addressed, your code will be in great shape! Keep up the good work, and feel free to reach out if you have any questions or need further assistance. 🚀
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fields=[ | ||
('id', models.AutoField(auto_created=True, primary_key=True, serialize=False, verbose_name='ID')), | ||
('created_at', models.DateTimeField(auto_now_add=True)), | ||
('user', models.ForeignKey(on_delete=django.db.models.deletion.CASCADE, related_name='orders', to=settings.AUTH_USER_MODEL)), |
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Ensure that the AUTH_USER_MODEL
setting in your Django settings is correctly configured to use this custom User
model. This is crucial for the ForeignKey relationship defined here.
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migrations.AddConstraint( | ||
model_name='ticket', | ||
constraint=models.UniqueConstraint(fields=('row', 'seat', 'movie_session'), name='ticket_constraint'), |
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The unique constraint on the Ticket
model ensures that each combination of row
, seat
, and movie_session
is unique. This is a good practice to prevent duplicate tickets for the same seat in a session.
class Order(models.Model): | ||
created_at = models.DateTimeField(auto_now_add=True) | ||
user = models.ForeignKey( | ||
settings.AUTH_USER_MODEL, |
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Ensure that the AUTH_USER_MODEL
setting in your Django settings is correctly configured to use this custom User
model. This is crucial for the ForeignKey relationship defined here.
def clean(self) -> None: | ||
cinema_hall = self.movie_session.cinema_hall | ||
if self.row > cinema_hall.rows: | ||
raise ValidationError( | ||
{ | ||
"row": [ | ||
"row number must be in available range: " | ||
f"(1, rows): (1, {cinema_hall.rows})" | ||
] | ||
} | ||
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if self.seat > cinema_hall.seats_in_row: | ||
raise ValidationError( | ||
{ | ||
"seat": [ | ||
"seat number must be in available range: " | ||
f"(1, seats_in_row): (1, {cinema_hall.seats_in_row})" | ||
] | ||
} | ||
) |
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The clean
method in the Ticket
model is correctly implemented to validate that the row
and seat
numbers are within the valid range for the associated cinema_hall
. This ensures data integrity and prevents invalid ticket entries.
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def save(self, *args, **kwargs) -> None: | ||
self.full_clean() |
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Calling self.full_clean()
in the save
method ensures that the clean
method is executed before saving, which is a good practice to maintain data integrity.
services/order.py
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username: str, | ||
date: datetime = None) -> Order: | ||
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user = get_user_model().objects.get(username=username) |
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Consider handling exceptions when retrieving the user by username. If the user does not exist, get()
will raise a DoesNotExist
exception, which should be caught and handled appropriately.
services/order.py
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def get_orders(username: str = None) -> Order: | ||
if username: | ||
user = get_user_model().objects.get(username=username) |
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Similar to the comment above, ensure that exceptions are handled when retrieving the user by username. This will prevent the application from crashing if the user is not found.
services/user.py
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def get_user(user_id: int) -> User: | ||
return get_user_model().objects.get(id=user_id) |
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Consider handling exceptions when retrieving the user by ID. If the user does not exist, get()
will raise a DoesNotExist
exception, which should be caught and handled appropriately.
services/user.py
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last_name: str = None | ||
) -> User: | ||
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user = get_user_model().objects.get(id=user_id) |
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Similar to the comment above, ensure that exceptions are handled when retrieving the user by ID. This will prevent the application from crashing if the user is not found.
"db", | ||
] | ||
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AUTH_USER_MODEL = "db.User" |
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The AUTH_USER_MODEL
setting is correctly configured to use the custom User
model from the db
app. This ensures that the custom user model is used throughout the project.
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Great job on addressing most of the previous issues! 🎉 Your code is well-structured and adheres to Django's best practices in many areas. However, there are a few points that need your attention to enhance the code's functionality and maintainability:
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Repetition of
save()
Method: In thecreate_order
function, thesave()
method is called twice. Refactor this to ensuresave()
is called only once per object to avoid redundancy. -
Use of Previously Created Functions: Improve maintainability by using the
get_user
function within theupdate_user
function for consistency. -
Return Type for
get_orders
: Update the return type annotation toQuerySet[Order]
to accurately reflect the function's output. -
Exception Handling: Implement exception handling for scenarios where a
MovieSession
with the given ID is not found to prevent runtime errors. -
Timezone Settings: Consider setting
USE_TZ = True
to enable timezone-aware datetimes, which is a recommended practice for handling time data in Django applications.
These improvements will not only enhance the robustness of your code but also make it more maintainable and consistent. Keep up the great work, and continue learning from these experiences to refine your skills! 🚀
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def delete_movie_session_by_id(session_id: int) -> None: | ||
MovieSession.objects.get(id=session_id).delete() |
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Implement exception handling to manage scenarios where the MovieSession
with the given ID is not found. This will prevent potential runtime errors during deletion.
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if date: | ||
order.created_at = date | ||
order.save() |
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The save()
method is called twice in the create_order
function: once after setting the created_at
date and again implicitly when tickets are associated with the order. Consider refactoring to call save()
only once after all modifications are complete to avoid redundancy.
return order | ||
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def get_orders(username: str = None) -> Order: |
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The return type annotation for get_orders
is incorrect. This function returns a QuerySet
of Order
objects, not a single Order
. Consider updating the return type to QuerySet[Order]
.
try: | ||
user = get_user_model().objects.get(id=user_id) |
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Consider using the get_user
function to retrieve the user instance in the update_user
function. This will improve code maintainability and consistency by reusing existing functionality.
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USE_TZ = False |
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Consider setting USE_TZ = True
to enable timezone-aware datetimes, which is a recommended practice for handling time data in Django applications.
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