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WalkthroughThe documents related to hooks and Riverpod have been revised to enhance clarity and comprehensiveness. Key changes include a clearer distinction between hooks and Riverpod, emphasizing that hooks are part of the separate Changes
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website/docs/introduction/why_riverpod.mdx (1)
44-44: Approved: Addition of "etc..." acknowledges topic complexityThe addition of "etc..." to the list of features is appropriate as it indicates that the list is not exhaustive, which is accurate given the complexity of asynchronous operations and their impact on user experience. This change helps readers understand that there may be additional considerations beyond those explicitly listed.
Consider expanding this point in the future by adding one or two more concrete examples of features that complicate asynchronous requests. This could provide even more value to readers who might not be aware of all the potential challenges.
website/i18n/fr/docusaurus-plugin-content-docs/current/introduction.mdx (1)
38-40: Excellent additions to the "Motivation" section!The new bullet points effectively illustrate the complexity of modern app development and the challenges that Riverpod addresses. This provides readers with a clearer understanding of Riverpod's value proposition.
Consider adding a brief explanation or example for "interfaces utilisateur optimistes" (optimistic user interfaces) as it might not be immediately clear to all readers.
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website/i18n/ja/docusaurus-plugin-content-docs/current/concepts/about_hooks.mdx (4)
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40-52: Comprehensive explanation of Hooks concept and purposeThe expanded explanation of Hooks is excellent, providing:
- A clear definition of Hooks as functions used within widgets.
- Their purpose in enhancing reusability and composability.
- The origin of Hooks from React and their adaptation to Flutter.
This context is crucial for users to understand the concept and potential benefits of using Hooks.
Consider adding a brief example or use case here to illustrate when Hooks might be particularly useful. This could help readers immediately grasp the practical applications of Hooks.
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55-196: Excellent practical comparison between StatefulWidget and HookWidgetThe addition of detailed code examples comparing StatefulWidget and HookWidget implementations is highly valuable:
- It provides a concrete, real-world example (fade-in animation) that users can relate to.
- The side-by-side comparison clearly demonstrates the differences in approach and potential benefits of using Hooks.
- The explanations following the HookWidget example are particularly insightful, highlighting key advantages such as avoiding memory leaks and improved reusability.
Consider adding a brief comment about the performance implications, if any, of using Hooks vs StatefulWidget. This could help users make more informed decisions about when to use each approach.
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[uncategorized] ~55-~55: 「ことができる」という表現は冗長な可能性があります。
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198-253: Clear and concise explanation of Hook rulesThe addition of a section explicitly stating the rules for using Hooks is excellent:
- It clearly outlines where and how Hooks can be used.
- The examples of correct and incorrect usage provide practical guidance.
- The explanation of why certain practices are incorrect helps users understand the underlying principles.
This section will be invaluable in preventing common mistakes and misunderstandings when using Hooks.
Consider adding a brief explanation of why these rules exist (e.g., how they relate to the internal workings of Hooks). This could help users better understand and remember the rules.
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[uncategorized] ~55-~55: 「ことができる」という表現は冗長な可能性があります。
Context: ...ら徐々に現れるフェードインアニメーションを手動で実装する場合、Hooks を使用することができます。 [StatefulWidget]を使用する場合、コードは次のように...(DOUSI_KOTOGADEKIRU)
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255-310: Comprehensive guide on integrating Hooks with RiverpodThe addition of a section on Hooks and Riverpod integration is excellent:
- It clearly explains the need for separate installation of flutter_hooks.
- The introduction of HookConsumerWidget and its usage is well-explained.
- Multiple approaches for combining Hooks and Riverpod are presented, giving users flexibility.
This section provides crucial guidance for users wanting to leverage both Hooks and Riverpod in their projects.
Consider adding a brief comparison of the different approaches (HookConsumerWidget vs separate builders), highlighting scenarios where one might be preferred over the other. This could help users choose the most appropriate approach for their specific use case.
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[uncategorized] ~55-~55: 「ことができる」という表現は冗長な可能性があります。
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website/i18n/ko/docusaurus-plugin-content-docs/current/concepts/about_hooks.mdx (2)
52-52: LGTM: Comprehensive explanation of hooks with effective examplesThe "What are hooks?" section provides a thorough explanation of the concept, effectively using code examples to demonstrate the benefits of hooks over StatefulWidget. The comparison is clear and highlights the advantages in terms of reusability and composability.
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Consider expanding on the "etc..." by providing one or two additional concrete examples of hook use cases. This would give readers a more comprehensive understanding of hooks' versatility.
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267-321: LGTM: Comprehensive guide on combining hooks with RiverpodThe "Hooks and Riverpod" section provides clear and practical guidance on using hooks in conjunction with Riverpod. The explanation of installation requirements is helpful, and the introduction of HookConsumerWidget and related classes is well-done. The code examples effectively demonstrate different approaches to combining hooks and Riverpod.
Suggestion for improvement:
Consider adding a brief explanation of the performance implications or benefits of using HookConsumerWidget compared to using separate HookBuilder and Consumer widgets. This would help developers make more informed decisions about which approach to use in their projects.website/docs/concepts/about_hooks.mdx (2)
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61-196: Effective comparison of StatefulWidget and HookWidget implementationsThe addition of detailed code examples comparing StatefulWidget and HookWidget implementations for a fade-in animation is excellent. These examples clearly demonstrate the differences in approach and the benefits of using hooks.
The explanations following the HookWidget example provide valuable insights into hooks' behavior, including memory management and reusability.
Consider adding a brief comment at the beginning of each code example to explicitly state which approach (StatefulWidget or HookWidget) is being demonstrated. This would enhance readability, especially for developers quickly scanning the document.
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266-341: Comprehensive guide on using hooks with RiverpodThe new "Hooks and Riverpod" section is an excellent addition to the documentation. It provides clear instructions on installation requirements and demonstrates various approaches to combining hooks with Riverpod. The code examples effectively illustrate different implementation patterns.
Consider adding a brief comparison of the different approaches (HookConsumerWidget, separate builders, and HookConsumer) to help developers choose the most appropriate method for their use case.
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71-103: Great addition of a practical code example!The inclusion of this code snippet effectively demonstrates how Riverpod simplifies the implementation of complex features. The explanation that follows clearly highlights the key benefits, such as handling "search as you type," "pull to refresh," and "infinite list," while managing error and loading states.
This practical example significantly enhances the introduction by showing Riverpod's capabilities in action.
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1-103: Overall excellent improvements to the Riverpod introduction!The changes in this file significantly enhance the introduction to Riverpod. The expanded content, additional examples, and the inclusion of a practical code snippet make the document more comprehensive and engaging. These improvements will help readers better understand Riverpod's value proposition and capabilities.
Great job on making the introduction more informative and user-friendly!
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1-38: Excellent clarification on Hooks and their relationship with RiverpodThe introduction has been significantly improved, providing clear information about Hooks, their independence from Riverpod, and guidance on when to use them. This is particularly valuable for:
- Clarifying that Hooks are from a separate package (
flutter_hooks).- Advising beginners against using Hooks initially.
- Explaining the trade-offs of using Hooks.
These changes will help users make informed decisions about incorporating Hooks into their projects.
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1-51: LGTM: Clear introduction and guidance on hooks usageThe introduction and "Should you use hooks?" section provide a clear explanation of hooks and their relationship to Riverpod. The guidance on when to use hooks is well-balanced, acknowledging both the benefits and potential drawbacks. This helps users make an informed decision about incorporating hooks into their projects.
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201-265: LGTM: Clear and concise explanation of hook rulesThe "Hook rules" section effectively outlines the constraints for using hooks. The examples of correct and incorrect usage are particularly helpful in illustrating these rules. This section provides crucial information for developers to avoid common pitfalls when implementing hooks.
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323-334: LGTM: Comprehensive references providedThe references section at the end of the file provides a complete list of links to relevant classes and packages mentioned throughout the document. This is helpful for readers who want to explore these topics further or access the official documentation for specific classes or packages.
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1-334: Overall assessment: Excellent documentation on hooks and Riverpod integrationThis document provides a comprehensive and well-structured explanation of hooks, their relationship with Riverpod, and how to use them together. The content is clear, informative, and includes helpful code examples that effectively demonstrate key concepts. The additions and changes made in this update have improved the overall quality and usefulness of the documentation.
Key strengths:
- Clear explanation of what hooks are and when to use them
- Effective comparison between StatefulWidget and HookWidget implementations
- Well-defined rules for using hooks with clear examples
- Comprehensive guide on integrating hooks with Riverpod
Minor suggestions for improvement have been made in previous comments, but these are not critical and do not detract from the overall high quality of the document.
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1-30: Improved introduction and guidance on hooks usageThe expanded introduction and new "Should you use hooks?" section provide valuable context and guidance for users, especially newcomers to Riverpod. This addition helps set appropriate expectations and clarifies the relationship between hooks and Riverpod.
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32-59: Enhanced explanation of hooks and their use casesThe expanded "What are hooks?" section provides a more comprehensive explanation of hooks, their origin, and their purpose in Flutter development. This improvement helps users better understand when and why to use hooks.
The removal of the "etc..." bullet point from the list of use cases aligns with the PR objective of removing a confusing element. This change makes the list more specific and informative.
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198-264: Clear explanation of hooks usage rulesThe addition of "The rules of hooks" section is a valuable improvement to the documentation. It clearly outlines the constraints of using hooks and provides practical examples of correct and incorrect usage. This information is crucial for developers to avoid common pitfalls when implementing hooks.
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1-341: Overall excellent improvements to the hooks documentationThe revisions to this documentation file have significantly enhanced its clarity, comprehensiveness, and usefulness. Key improvements include:
- Clearer introduction and guidance on when to use hooks
- More detailed explanations of hooks concepts
- Effective code examples comparing StatefulWidget and HookWidget implementations
- Clear rules for using hooks
- Comprehensive guide on combining hooks with Riverpod
These changes, including the removal of the confusing "etc..." bullet point, align well with the PR objectives and provide valuable information for both newcomers and experienced developers using Riverpod and hooks.
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website/i18n/fr/docusaurus-plugin-content-docs/current/introduction.mdx (2)
38-40: Approved changes with a minor suggestionThe additions of "interfaces utilisateur optimistes" and "mode hors ligne" enhance the list of features. The typographical error with "etc..." has been correctly addressed.
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70-100: Code example approval with minor suggestionThe code example effectively demonstrates how to use Riverpod to fetch packages from pub.dev, handling asynchronous operations and potential errors. It's a great illustration of Riverpod's capabilities.
Consider improving the formatting of the final comment for better readability:
-- Cet extrait est toute la logique métier dont vous avez besoin pour une -- "recherche au fur et à mesure de la saisie". -- + "pull to refresh" + "infinite list", tout en gérant les états d'erreur/de chargement. ++ Cet extrait est toute la logique métier dont vous avez besoin pour : ++ - une "recherche au fur et à mesure de la saisie" ++ - "pull to refresh" ++ - "infinite list" ++ Le tout en gérant les états d'erreur et de chargement.🧰 Tools
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52-52: Consider removing or elaborating on the "etc." entryThe addition of "etc." to the list of use cases for hooks is vague and doesn't provide specific value to the reader. Consider either removing this entry or replacing it with one or two more concrete examples of hook use cases to maintain the document's informativeness.
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1-100: Overall content approvalThe introduction to Riverpod is well-structured and informative. It effectively explains what Riverpod is, its motivation, and the challenges it addresses in asynchronous programming. The added example of fetching packages from pub.dev demonstrates the simplicity and power of using Riverpod for complex tasks.
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1-24: Excellent clarification on hooks and their relationship with RiverpodThe introduction and the new section "Should I use hooks?" provide valuable context and guidance for users. The clear distinction between hooks and Riverpod, emphasizing that hooks are from a separate package, helps prevent confusion. Additionally, the advice for new Riverpod users to avoid hooks initially is a thoughtful addition that can help users focus on core concepts before introducing additional complexity.
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26-51: Improved explanation of hooks and their purposeThe expanded explanation of hooks provides a clearer understanding of their role as alternatives to
StatefulWidgetand their benefits in terms of reusability and composability. This enhancement will help users better grasp the concept and potential applications of hooks.
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54-186: Excellent code examples and explanationsThe side-by-side comparison of the
StatefulWidgetand hooks implementations of the fade-in animation is very effective in demonstrating the benefits of using hooks. The detailed comments in the hooks example provide clear explanations of each part of the code, which will be particularly helpful for users new to the concept. This section greatly enhances the document's educational value.
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188-246: Clear and crucial explanation of hook usage rulesThe "Rules of hooks" section is an essential addition to the document. It clearly outlines the constraints of using hooks and provides excellent examples of both correct and incorrect usage. This information is crucial for preventing common mistakes and ensuring proper implementation of hooks in projects. The inclusion of this section significantly enhances the practical value of the document for developers.
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248-310: Comprehensive guide on integrating hooks with RiverpodThe "Hooks and Riverpod" section provides valuable information on how to effectively combine hooks and Riverpod in projects. The introduction of the
HookConsumerWidgetand the clear code examples demonstrate practical ways to integrate these technologies. This section is particularly useful for developers looking to leverage both hooks and Riverpod in their applications, offering concrete solutions to potential integration challenges.
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1-310: Overall excellent improvements to the hooks documentationThe changes made to this document significantly enhance its educational value and practical usefulness for developers. The clarifications on the relationship between hooks and Riverpod, the expanded explanations, the comparative code examples, and the clear guidelines for usage all contribute to a more comprehensive and accessible resource. The document now provides a solid foundation for understanding hooks in the context of Riverpod and Flutter development.
While there's a minor suggestion for improvement (regarding the "etc." entry in the use cases list), the overall quality of the changes is excellent and greatly benefits the documentation.
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