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[das] updated for joint working group(s) and PP link #62
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@@ -40,16 +40,16 @@ | |||
<abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> and its Members. | |||
A Candidate Recommendation Snapshot has received <a | |||
href="https://www.w3.org/2023/Process-20231103/#dfn-wide-review">wide review</a>, is intended to | |||
gather implementation experience, and has commitments from Working Group members to <a | |||
gather implementation experience, and has commitments from Working Group<span include-if="Text Macro: JOINT">s</span> members to <a |
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apostrophe#Possessive_apostrophe suggests we should say "Working Groups' members" i.e. add an apostrophe at the end:
gather implementation experience, and has commitments from Working Group<span include-if="Text Macro: JOINT">s</span> members to <a | |
gather implementation experience, and has commitments from Working Group<span include-if="Text Macro: JOINT">s'</span> members to <a |
Disclaimer: I'm not a native speaker :)
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ah,, text need to 'exactly' align with text in https://github.com/w3c/specberus/pull/1820/files ...
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Could some native speaker from the team check the newly added specberus language w3c/specberus#1820?
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W3C comms were consulted and it seems both are correct so let's keep the current.
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Thanks! Some grammar suggestions.
@tabatkins could you kindly check this and merge this PR? |
Since this has been approved, I'll assume things are correct. If you need to make any fixes afterwards, feel free to open further PRs. |
put review comments to w3c/deviceorientation#145
This is in WIP, please do not merge this now.